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The Call of Duty

Agape4Gondor - 13 Dec 06 - 3:06 PM

General Comment

Oh MerryK !!!

I love this - particularly because it is noted by Tolkien that Faramir was so like unto Denethor that when he spoke - all listened and saw their lord in him.

Beautifully done - the lords were perfect, Faramir IMHO was perfect, and I loved the ending.

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The Call of Duty

Linda Hoyland - 07 Feb 07 - 7:42 PM

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I'm pleased to see this enjoyable story here and hope it will be the first of many.

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The Call of Duty

Rugi - 12 Dec 06 - 4:10 PM

Ch. 1: Dilemma Unmasked

Nice to see Gondorian Lords questioning Aragorn's assencion with some actually sound reasoning.  You are very fair to them - mentioning what must have been some real concerns.  I like your Faramir too - he's very in-control of the counsel without being too dictatorial - you strike a good note between graciousness and intensity.  It's interesting to see his sincere joy in the King's return being tempered by the realities of an exchange of soveriegns - it must be hard that the real love and loyalty the people have for him is standing in the way of what he really wants for Gondor.

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