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Fruition

Balrog - 19 Mar 07 - 6:33 PM

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I like this very much.  It gives the readers a sense of what could have happened if the Dol Amroth people were given the right to become heirs to the throne.

 Only thing is that Thorngil got away.

 Grin

Balrog

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EdorasLass - 19 Mar 07 - 9:12 PM

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Balrog -

 I'm a real sucker for AUs,  and I do seem to write not particularly nice ones. I just think it's fun, to turn things upside down from what we're used to seeing.

Thanks so much!

EL 

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Kateydidnt - 08 Apr 07 - 8:24 PM

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I would love to see a continuation of this, years later in which the "King" of Gondor finds out that Thorongil was no minor mercenary. . . I just want to see them get their comuppance.

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RS - 08 Apr 07 - 10:34 PM

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OOOHHH. I don't know who I dislike more.. Denethor or Finduilas and Imrahil.

Evil I tell you, very evil.

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EdorasLass - 18 May 07 - 7:59 PM

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Kateydidnt -

I've considered a continuation, but only briefly. AU-ing this drastically is hard work! But who knows, maybe one day! Thank you!

EL

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EdorasLass - 18 May 07 - 8:00 PM

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RS-

Heee...that's just the reaction I was hoping for. Thank you! :)

EL

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Nath - 18 May 07 - 10:24 PM

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Wonderfully twisted Smile

It would be interesting to see where things go after this...

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Peregrin_Ionad - 19 May 07 - 6:50 AM

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Yeah, I agree with Nath, This is completely twisted, and interesting.

Peregrin Ionad

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