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Day and Night
nobodyspecial - 18 Nov 06 - 11:29 AM
Wonderful story. The Peredhil family dynamics are realistic and mature -- no prank playing, silly acting elves here (thankfully). You also easily blend a dramatic storyline with some nice touches of humor and a promise of adventure ahead. I love your portrayal of Estel and Glorfindel, also. You show a lot of promise and I look forward to reading more stories from you.
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thorongirl - 19 Nov 06 - 4:18 PM
Great story thus far. You've put a lot of thought into your characterizations and your scenes are captivating and enjoyable to read. I think I best like your characterizations of Elladan and Glorfindel, though of course, Estel will always be my favorite. (But you've really gotten me liking these elves)! If you can do that, you've done a fine job indeed.
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eliza61 - 29 Nov 06 - 11:53 AM
Great, great chapter, love your writing. Poor Estel, talk about being stuck between the proverbial rock and a hard place. Hope Elladan is ok.
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peredhil lover - 29 Nov 06 - 1:27 PM
Thanks, eliza, I appreciate the feedback. I'm glad to know that you're enjoying the story. As for how Elladan fares, I'll try to post the next chapter today.
Thanks for taking the time to review,
peredhil lover
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