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The Lap of Time

Greywing - 04 Dec 06 - 2:01 AM

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It is heartbreakingly sad. A good fleshing-out of the appendix!

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Raihon - 01 Dec 06 - 3:19 PM

Ch. 1: The Lap of Time

Arwen's end has always been frustratingly murky to me, but this is a plausible and most welcome exploration of it.

I am intrigued by the idea you presented that Arwen measured herself against Luthien. I really loved Celeborn's line: "You know Lúthien's great deeds, but she could dance for a season and be surprised that others toiled." That was a stroke of brilliance.

-Raihon 

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Adaneth - 06 Dec 06 - 6:41 AM

Ch. 1: The Lap of Time

Gwynnyd, this so rocks.

Thanks--

Adaneth

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Gwynnyd - 06 Dec 06 - 1:00 PM

Ch. 1: The Lap of Time

Thanks so much for the positive feedback!

Gwynnyd

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witchofthedogs - 22 Dec 06 - 7:03 AM

Ch. 1: The Lap of Time

This is beautiful and heartbreaking and I think, in truth, I cried a little sitting here in my office.

Thank you.

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