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O, Cruel Fate

erunyauve - 29 Mar 07 - 11:48 AM

Ch. 9: And It All Goes Downhill From Here

>>Cirdan furrowed his brow. "Why exactly do you want to know how a Balrog looks like anyway?"

>>Neldor pretended not to hear and scurried quickly away.

Definitely more sophisticated that braining Glorfindel with a club, but not much wiser.

::sits back to watch the chaos ensue::

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Meril - 29 Mar 07 - 6:09 PM

Ch. 9: And It All Goes Downhill From Here

Ha ha ha! Greywing, this is very funny! 

I love the different voices in this, particularly Neldor's (somewhat twisted one re: healing!), and the subtle hints that the elves in different regions don't quite see eye-to-eye.  

"My crown-stealing uncle."  Oh, how I laughed at this one!

Keep it coming!

Allie 

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Shasta - 29 Mar 07 - 7:53 PM

Ch. 9: And It All Goes Downhill From Here

"...unless Morgoth's strategy involved incapacitating his enemies by making them howl with laughter."

 Not a bad idea, really. Feanor could have also been the first elf to die of hyperventilation. 

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Greywing - 30 Mar 07 - 7:39 AM

Ch. 9: And It All Goes Downhill From Here

Dear Shasta, Meril and the ever-faithful erunyauve, thank you all for your comments! I am glad you liked this chapter.

Definitely more sophisticated that braining Glorfindel with a club, but not much wiser.

::sits back to watch the chaos ensue::

There will be chaos indeed, I assure you.

I love the different voices in this, particularly Neldor's (somewhat twisted one re: healing!), and the subtle hints that the elves in different regions don't quite see eye-to-eye.

Why, thank you! Yes, Neldor has a rather morbid interest in the... finer points of his profession.

Not a bad idea, really. Feanor could have also been the first elf to die of hyperventilation

Argh! Make the nuzgul go away! Shoo!

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