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O, Cruel Fate
erunyauve - 29 Mar 07 - 11:48 AM
Ch. 9: And It All Goes Downhill From Here
>>Neldor pretended not to hear and scurried quickly away.
Definitely more sophisticated that braining Glorfindel with a club, but not much wiser.
::sits back to watch the chaos ensue::
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Meril - 29 Mar 07 - 6:09 PM
Ch. 9: And It All Goes Downhill From Here
Ha ha ha! Greywing, this is very funny!
I love the different voices in this, particularly Neldor's (somewhat twisted one re: healing!), and the subtle hints that the elves in different regions don't quite see eye-to-eye.
"My crown-stealing uncle." Oh, how I laughed at this one!
Keep it coming!
Allie
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Shasta - 29 Mar 07 - 7:53 PM
Ch. 9: And It All Goes Downhill From Here
"...unless Morgoth's strategy involved incapacitating his enemies by making them howl with laughter."
Not a bad idea, really. Feanor could have also been the first elf to die of hyperventilation.
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Greywing - 30 Mar 07 - 7:39 AM
Ch. 9: And It All Goes Downhill From Here
Dear Shasta, Meril and the ever-faithful erunyauve, thank you all for your comments! I am glad you liked this chapter.
Definitely more sophisticated that braining Glorfindel with a club, but not much wiser.
::sits back to watch the chaos ensue::
There will be chaos indeed, I assure you.
I love the different voices in this, particularly Neldor's (somewhat twisted one re: healing!), and the subtle hints that the elves in different regions don't quite see eye-to-eye.
Why, thank you! Yes, Neldor has a rather morbid interest in the... finer points of his profession.
Not a bad idea, really. Feanor could have also been the first elf to die of hyperventilation
Argh! Make the nuzgul go away! Shoo!
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