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O, Cruel Fate

erunyauve - 18 Oct 06 - 11:35 AM

Ch. 3: Elrond, Elrond, Elrond and a Rude Shock

>>It was a botanist's brain, honed by years of memorizing obscenely long, complicated Latin names and well used to trapping and hoarding any helpless bit of information that so happened to drift by.

I'm quite enjoying this - the writing is clever and the characters are fun and original.

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laureleaf - 18 Oct 06 - 2:53 PM

Ch. 3: Elrond, Elrond, Elrond and a Rude Shock

Well - this is definately the most intreaguing 'girl falls into Arda' plotline I've ever read! Usually I can't get myself past the first page, but this is quite funny thus far.  So, does this mean that Glorfindel is now in her body?

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oshun - 18 Oct 06 - 3:29 PM

Ch. 3: Elrond, Elrond, Elrond and a Rude Shock

Greywing--This is some serious stuff you are writing here. Appreciate the hard canon research as well--purple arrow fletchings indeed! Great Círdan: "I have ships to build, new blueprints to review, papers to sign and teary farewells to organize..."

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Raksha The Demon - 02 Mar 07 - 11:39 PM

Ch. 3: Elrond, Elrond, Elrond and a Rude Shock

Loved Neldor's jealousy of Elrond as the hot young celebrity doctor.  And the footnotes are great!

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