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Inheriting the Earth

Gwynnyd - 04 Oct 06 - 6:36 AM

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Dwim, that was great!

Dare I confess that it was not until the author's notes that I figured out who "Li" was? I kept trying to make him into someone, um, older... Wink

Gwynnyd 

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Inheriting the Earth

Dwimordene - 04 Oct 06 - 6:43 AM

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Hi Gwynnyd!

not until the author's notes that I figured out who "Li" was? I kept trying to make him into someone, um, older...

And perhaps blonder? (Following movieverse.) ;-)

That's great, actually, I was struggling to inject *some* mystery into it, while not being totally, obviously coy about descriptions. So if Li's identity wasn't fully realized until the end, I'm quite happy.

Thanks for your comments,

Dwim

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