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Yours to command

mistry89 - 13 Apr 07 - 1:20 PM

Ch. 24: Opening Moves

A turn for the better, a turn for the worse! It must have been horrible for anyone (in any universe) to have been seen as a political tool - whether a bargaining piece, a stepping-stone, or a barrier. I'm glad I'm a peasant!

Thank you for the update, and good news about your back.

Cheers :)

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Yours to command

Lialathuveril - 14 Apr 07 - 3:34 AM

Ch. 24: Opening Moves

Hello Mistry,
I agree it's a nasty experience to be seen not as a person, but only as a means to an end. However, Lothiriel is not one to just accept her fate quietly - and Muzgash might yet find that he's bitten off more than he can chew!

Thanks for your review! And greetings from a fellow peasant Smile


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