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Yours to command

Shandris - 06 Nov 07 - 10:22 AM

Ch. 10: Snake Fish

I liked the fragment about Wilwarin's preparations for the party! It's very well written, especially all those details concerning her toilet (jewellery, gown etc.)

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Yours to command

Lialathuveril - 07 Nov 07 - 12:12 PM

Ch. 10: Snake Fish

Hello Shandris,
maybe that just shows that it's easier to write about something you know, like making yourself pretty for a party, than what you don't know (for example killing wargs!).

I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the tale as well.


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