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Yours to command

Iel_o_Thorongil - 08 Oct 06 - 2:25 AM

Ch. 3: Nightfall

well---I certainly wasn't expecting blindness. It works though--very interesting. :)

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Yours to command

Lialathuveril - 08 Oct 06 - 10:40 AM

Ch. 3: Nightfall


I promised some answers in this chapter, didn't I! I'm glad to hear you like it. I wasn't sure if my readers would appreciate this twist, but after a year of reading and writing about Lothiriel, I was getting a bit tired of the beautiful, accomplished, flawless princess that she's usually depicted as and I wanted to go for something else.


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Yours to command

TariElfLady - 23 Jul 10 - 11:05 AM

Ch. 3: Nightfall

First I must say I am most intrigued by this story and find it hard to stop reading.  Second, I was surprised to find Lotheriel is blind.  I'm sure this will add a new and exciting dememsion to this tale

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