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To The Waters And The Wild

oshun - 09 Oct 06 - 7:52 PM

Ch. 2: To The Waters

Lovely friendship fic with charming storytelling technique. Love the young Legolas and Aragorn. Nicely done humor and language choices. Love the W. B. Yeats quotes. Thranduil's cameo appearance is great. (I can see you really like him.)

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To The Waters And The Wild

Iel_o_Thorongil - 11 Oct 06 - 11:09 PM

Ch. 2: To The Waters

This had me in tears at the end. The relationship you portray here between Aragorn and Legolas is one of the most realistic, if not the most realistic I've ever read. And I have to commend your decision to have Legolas let Aragorn go by himself. It's against gut for a parent, but all children have to make their own mistakes and forge their own paths. Make no mistake, seeking wisdom and support from elders is a good thing, but coddling is stunting. Letting Aragorn go was no easy thing. I appreciate that choice and the advice that went with it.

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