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The Call Of Duty: Legolas At Erebor

LaAcadian - 21 May 07 - 3:17 PM

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Jael,

 I thoughly enjoyed your story. Especially appreciate that you protray Thranduil as a noble king not a greedy elf and severe father. I can not imagine Thranduil did not love his son. He  had an enormously expensive mithril shirt made to protect Legolas.

Your characters are well rounded. Your use of dialogue good. Your setting well describe and easy to visualize. But most impressive was the pacing. The battle flowed well and was engaging. The conflict was good and believable. I could not stop reading and I found myself lost into the story.

Well Done! I look forward to read more of your stories.

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