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Stirring Rings

Freyalyn - 12 Dec 07 - 12:42 AM

Ch. 24: The Deep Breath Before the Plunge

Lovely detail and characterisation, as ever.

 'Troops' not 'troupes'.  Sorry....

 Very dark feeling to it, even with the hobbit episodes.  The lights are going out.

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Stirring Rings

Larner - 13 Dec 07 - 3:16 AM

Ch. 24: The Deep Breath Before the Plunge

Unfortunately, within a relatively short time there will be a kingdom with no king in the south, and a king with no kingdom in the north; Arvedui will be dead alongside his second son; and his older son and widow will be taking refuge in Mithlond.  Yes, the lights are going out.

As for "troupes"--it is a variant spelling and the one I've used predominantly in my writing.  Hope you don't mind too much.

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