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The World of Men

RS - 21 Feb 07 - 5:34 PM

Ch. 2: Home

I love Haldor's introduction in this story --"his black hair hung in wild, wavy strands...and a big grin was plastered across his face." Quite a memorable picture for me!  I've a feeling he's going to be quite a handful!

I like your OC's. I'm quite curious about Indelin and the angry Halladan. And Ellemir...was that a forced smile (in the kitchen)? I'm dying to know what their stories are. 

I'm really enjoying this..I'm hooked.  Can't wait for your next update.

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