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Where the Shadow Lies

RS - 02 Aug 06 - 3:41 PM

Ch. 1: Condemnation

Your portrayal of Denethor has been written so well that I never thought I would despise anyone as much as I do this character!

The confrontation between Gandalf and Denothor was intense. It's frustrating that Denethor has won this exchange of words...this time.

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Where the Shadow Lies

RS - 02 Aug 06 - 3:45 PM

Ch. 3: Pain Past Caring

This was a very difficult chapter to read. The demise of Fallon was expected but still very hard to take. 

One felt Aragorn's desparation...and sadness.  Very good build up. An unforgettable chapter.

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Where the Shadow Lies

RS - 20 Aug 06 - 11:02 PM

Ch. 12: Epilogue: THe Lady of Minas Tirith

One cannot ask for a better ending!  You truly have this reader clapping her hands for Finduilas and what she had to say to Denethor.  Though Finduilas fate is very disturbing and quite sad, there is total satisfaction in those spine-tingling and chilling  last words for Denethor, "He is my champion,...when he returns, it will be at the head of an army.... When he returns, husband mine, it will be a dark day for the Steward."

RS

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