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No Man's Child

Gwynnyd - 22 Jan 07 - 9:31 PM

Ch. 44: Chapter 43

And I was thinking to myself only yesterday.. gee, there hasn't been an update in awhile!

A quiet chapter that hints of several new developments.  Sigh.  I suppose I can't hope for starlting revelations and thrilling action, or at least a visit from Aragorn, in every one, can I?  

Poor Nienelen!  So many worries.

Gwynnyd




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Gandalfs apprentice - 22 Jan 07 - 11:01 PM

Ch. 44: Chapter 43

A chapter begging for an early update! Please don't keep us waiting so long again! What will happen to Edainion, and when will Arwen appear in the story....well, you know all my questions!

You're missing a cap T in the first paragraph.

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Anoriath - 23 Jan 07 - 6:10 PM

Ch. 44: Chapter 43

A quiet chapter that hints of several new developments. Sigh. I suppose I can't hope for starlting revelations and thrilling action, or at least a visit from Aragorn, in every one, can I?

Ah, well, this seems to be the same I reason I struggled so much with this chapter and thus why it took so long. It's akin to the sophomoritis of middle movie/book in a trilogy. Lots of story arc building... not a whole lot of climatic action.

Lots of hair-pulling when writing this one. "NOTHing is HAPPening! I am SICK to death of meaningful looks! O.M.G. This. is. THE. most. putrid stuff. I have. EVER. written." *Lather-rinse-repeat* :D

Hopefully it's not just me who finds the writing experience an inherently bipolar one.

Thanks Gwynnyd!

~Silli

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Anoriath - 23 Jan 07 - 6:18 PM

Ch. 44: Chapter 43

A chapter begging for an early update! Please don't keep us waiting so long again!

Yes, I honestly really regret that. I would stare and STARE at that chapter until it got to the point I just couldn't stand looking at it anymore. bleh.

What will happen to Edainion, and when will Arwen appear in the story....well, you know all my questions!

LOL! Well, good, that means you're still interested in having them answered. :)

Got the tweak. Thanks, GA!

~Silli

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