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The Tower Hills
DrummerWench - 12 Jul 06 - 9:56 PM
Thanks for commenting, G.A.!
Actually, I'm working on a song (says the wench who never writes poetry).
I have Plans for Tasarian - she came into this tale from another story that exists, so far, only in my head. If ever I write it, I'll modify the Tower Hills to fit with that. The song she sings (if I can write one she sings it) furthers her story, and annoys Gildor.
In reading through it again, it does need further work. Sentence structure, redundancies, hmmm...
DW
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The Tower Hills
Gandalfs apprentice - 10 Jul 06 - 10:02 AM
Hello, DrummerWench
An evocative and gentle story. But you are right, it's unfinished. A lovely tale told by Tasarian at the Elven camp would enrich it greatly. Do you have any ideas? Something romantice--Rapunzel perhaps, since the story is about towers.
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