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Birthday Kisses

Agape4Gondor - 16 Aug 06 - 8:22 PM

Ch. 1: Birthday Kisses

Oh! Raksha! You broke my heart with the last line! An excellent portrayal of an incredibly hard birthday.

Bless you!!!!!!!!

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Birthday Kisses

Raksha The Demon - 17 Aug 06 - 12:23 AM

Ch. 1: Birthday Kisses

Birthday Kisses

Oh! Raksha! You broke my heart with the last line! An excellent portrayal of an incredibly hard birthday.

Bless you!!!!!!!!

I'm so glad you liked the piece, Agape!  I think that Denethor was not a man who dealt easily with young children; and would not have easily given of himself emotionally to Faramir, especially after Finduilas' death; which was, unfortunately, a time when Faramir would have most needed his father's attention.  It doesn't mean that Denethor didn't love Faramir; he did, to some extent, but had difficulty showing it.

--RAKSHA THE DEMON

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nrink nrink - 30 Sep 06 - 6:45 PM

Ch. 1: Birthday Kisses

Hi Raksha,

 This is such a cool story! Cool is such a non ME word, but well... :) The Italian greyhound is an excellent choice for Finduilas - graceful, beautiful and gentle. Now that I think about it,  Denethor doesn't doesn't seem like a dog person at all.

Hmm but even if he did - to my mind it would probably be a wolfhound. A regal dog with an austere hunter-like grace. :)

nrink   

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Agape4Gondor - 13 Feb 09 - 5:53 AM

Ch. 1: Birthday Kisses

Absolutely excellent tale. I would have wept over the puppy's kisses, if I were not weeping over Denethor's loss.... Both Faramir and his father suffered so much. I love that you have Imrahil thinking Faramir like his father. That was always my thought.

Again, excellent tale.

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