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Aganaphel - 20 Sep 08 - 3:23 PM

Ch. 23: Under An Influence

Great update, The Lauderdale! I was almost sure that you were about to make Maevyn reach the village, warn them and return undetected. I kept thinking how unrealistic it would be. I am really happy to see that in truth Maevyn  abandoned that brash plan and even apologized to Leni (sort of).  Also I like the girl's attachment to eagle eggs, though I wonder what the orcs want them for: could be nothing good, indeed.

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thelauderdale - 21 Sep 08 - 10:02 AM

Ch. 23: Under An Influence


Thanks for your review!  You're not the only person who thought Maevyn had warned the village.  There will be other opportunities, but this time I just thought she was at too much of a disadvantage and would have wandered blind in the woods till Grushak tracked her down and put a knife in her. Maevyn also has a tendency to spout off without thinking, so I was glad she made up with Leni and to see them working together for once. 

As for what Orcs want with eagle eggs, that is coming...

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