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The Return of the Shadow

oshun - 24 Mar 06 - 7:20 PM

Ch. 13: Friendship, Vienna, Europe, 1781

Well, you certainly surprised me with this chapter. What a leap of imagination. Beautifully written—your writing just gets better and better. "There was no song of creation in this world." But, if anyone could come close it would have to have been Mozart (or is that just my personal prejudice creeping in here?).


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The Return of the Shadow

JunoMagic - 01 Apr 06 - 4:58 AM

Ch. 13: Friendship, Vienna, Europe, 1781

Hello Oshun,

I'm sorry that I get around to replying now. I thought I had done so already, but obviously I didn't. :-(

Anyway, I'm really glad you liked the chapter. I had a lot of fun combining history, Tolkien and my own approach to the Fourth Theme of the Ainulindale in this chapter.

I posted chapter 14 today, and I hope you will enjoy that newest installment of my "Return of the Shadow" as well.

Thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave me a comment.


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