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Until The Stars Are All Alight

Gandalfs apprentice - 02 Apr 06 - 1:43 PM

Ch. 1: Until The Stars Are All Alight

I approved this story when it was up for review, and was so pleased to see it accepted in the archive. It is a thoughtful, moving, HUMAN story by a very talented writer. Thank you, kenaz.

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Until The Stars Are All Alight

thorongirl - 02 Apr 06 - 3:44 PM

Ch. 1: Until The Stars Are All Alight

Unusual, and very compelling. I loved this story. Nice mix of compassion and sensuality, beautifully written. Quite impressive.

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Until The Stars Are All Alight

oshun - 04 Apr 06 - 4:05 PM

Ch. 1: Until The Stars Are All Alight

You put so much into such a short story. You capture Aragorn's youthfulness and inexperience without a hint of condescension and still manage to foreshadow greatness. Halbarad is equally convincing. The title is perfect. The sentiment throughout is so moving without a whisper of sentimentality.

Oshun

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nobodyspecial - 06 Apr 06 - 7:24 AM

Ch. 1: Until The Stars Are All Alight

This was beautiful! I still have goosebumps from reading it. What a marvelous blend of emotions. I've been reading fanfics for several years now and I would definitely list this as one of the very best.  Genuinely outstanding.

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docmon - 18 Oct 06 - 5:46 PM

Ch. 1: Until The Stars Are All Alight

well done rendition of young aragorn coming of age into the harsh life of the Ranger. Just the right balance of sullen "youngun" and noble upbringing, and great contrasting of experience and inexperience. well done.

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