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Evenstar

Envinyatar - 16 Feb 06 - 9:06 AM

Ch. 1: Evenstar

Oh, I like this very much. A rare glimpse into Arwen's mind and a rarer one that makes her interesting! I especially like the imagery - the evenstar that could burn brighter in the twilight or herald the coming of a new morning. Beautifully done.

Couple of typos I spotted - dais, and 'line of Earendil'.

Cheers, Envinyatar

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