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The Princess and the Horse Lord

telpethoniel - 31 Jul 06 - 5:30 PM

Ch. 16: A Betrothal

Delightful as always! A true pleasure to read

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Bardess - 01 Aug 06 - 3:44 AM

Ch. 16: A Betrothal

Drunk or sober, Legolas is consistently very charming.  You have given Eomer an excellent foreshadowing statement;  "I fear taking away your youth...confuse lust for love ......."  Is Lothiriel going to get a chance to fall in and out of love or confuse lust for love during her trip to Lorien?  It will be interesting to see how her development progresses.

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oshun - 03 Aug 06 - 6:08 PM

Ch. 16: A Betrothal

To Telpethoniel and Bardess--thanks for the comments and following the story.
Drunk or sober, Legolas is consistently very charming.  You have given Eomer an excellent foreshadowing statement...
Relating to the above, Bardess, glad you like my Legolas--he's not so easy to do! Regarding "foreshadowing"... I won't  reveal any "spoilers" here, but I must admit you're on to me...
Thanks--Oshun

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telpethoniel - 05 Aug 06 - 5:57 AM

Ch. 16: A Betrothal

I agree with Bardess, Legolas is portrayed as more human than the etherial being we knew in the movies and I like the way you have portrayed him

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