Oh, a wonderful installment oshun! The intensity that characterized your first meeting of Eomer & Lothiriel is still there, and the characterization continues to be excellent.
*Imrahil's sudden gravity intrigues me - I wonder how he's going to react to all of this.
*I love your Elves!
*"Flirting with Elves, my love? I should make you pay for that." Ha! I LOVE that line!!
*I spotted Elphir and Prince Imrahil and rushed toward them.
Since this is Lothiriel's direct thought, would she think of her father as "Prince Imrahil"?
*Imrahil nodded gravely, his eyes darkening, and replied, "Of course, go for a stroll. Have your talk and enjoy the day."
Given the lines of dialogue that come before and after, this line sounds a tad too modern.
I look forward to seeing more :D