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I Can Feel It!

Balrog - 14 Feb 07 - 10:19 PM

General Comment

I would like to comment on the use of going deaf would be hard a person such as an elf.  Even elves are not immune to things.  I also like the way you used the surroundings to help out the elf.  We would also do that in real life.  I worked with the blind and it is not easy.  Thanks again for a very interesting story about an elf going deaf.  I cried.

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I Can Feel It!

Bardess - 09 Jan 06 - 2:29 PM

Ch. 1: 01

Change one small detail and everything changes; this is a sound theory often used to great advantage in sci fi.  Good use of movie verse dialogue.

The second to last sentence in the first paragraph is somewhat awkward.

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