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The Surrender

NiennaSorrowing - 08 Dec 05 - 5:16 PM

Ch. 1: The Surrender

This is one of the most powerful poems I have ever read.  The rhythm and rhyming is excellent, and it truly captures the weariness and sorrow of those caught in an endless war.

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