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Eregion

Alassante - 03 Apr 07 - 6:37 AM

Ch. 1: Eregion

I like this. Its subtle wording about a powerful subject. Whenever I see Celebrimbor on a character list, I have to read it because he's one of my faves and such a tragic story. I really like that you wrote about Legolas sensing his ghost. Alot like the Dead Marshes and the Paths of the Dead still had spirits lingering, I imagine some of the elves lingered in Eregion since some of them had the Noldo curse which I imagine would leave some of them lost and/or lingering there.Cry

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Shasta - 03 Apr 07 - 5:44 PM

Ch. 1: Eregion

Understatement is the key to brilliance. I think you've got it.

 I really like the way you've used this phrase: "This was Hollin that once was Eregion." It's very powerful...I might be wrong, but is this direct from the book?

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LaAcadian - 04 Apr 07 - 6:18 AM

Ch. 1: Eregion

I loved the imagery. Your description slid the reader neatly into your world.

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