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Divine Intervention

Rithralindë - 09 Dec 07 - 5:31 PM

Ch. 2: Yavanna

Ha! :-D This is lovely, witty and flows well. I really liked the conversation between her and Varda, leaves them 'godly' but also shows their more 'human' side. Smile

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Divine Intervention

Crowdaughter - 26 Jan 08 - 4:17 PM

Ch. 2: Yavanna

Hi, Meril! That was wonderful! I love the way you play with the placing of the words, and the way Yavanna's jealousy works to bring about some good things, ion the end. Yay for a great and very creative look at the Valar! I like! Smile

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Elena Tiriel - 27 Jan 08 - 4:10 AM

Ch. 2: Yavanna

Oh, Allie, this is hilarious!

I always wondered where the latest incarnation of the White Tree, the one that King Scruffy found, came from.... LOLOL!

Well done!

- Barbara

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