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Through the Shadows

MiniFruitbat - 11 Sep 06 - 10:01 PM

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I quite enjoyed this. It did have a Cosette-ish element that sneaks into a lot of stories about OFCs, but the premise was both believable and original, AND Eledher didn't end up saving the world or marrying Aragorn - she just did her part in her little piece of the world.
The writing in the first few paragraphs was excellent. It became a bit rougher as the story progressed, but overall remained of a high calibre.

I'm bookmarking this so I can read it again when I can't find any other good stories about OCs.

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Through the Shadows

EdorasLass - 12 Sep 06 - 6:23 AM

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I have to admit, I like traumatic backstories, though I know they're often overdone. :)  Having said that, I'm especially glad it came across as both believeable and realistic. Thank you!


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