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Another Man's Cage

oshun - 06 Jun 07 - 8:26 AM

Ch. 44: Chapter Forty-Four--Macalaure

You weave ordinary daily life in Valinor into this chapter in such a convincing way. Like the idea of grandpa stepping in and making the boys' trip to Alqualondë more reasonable and less of a trek. Love Maglor playing the boyfriend--he and his girl are such charming geeky musicians and suit one another so well. The descriptions of Alqualondë and the cultural differences are lovely. It is also interesting to see Maglor comforting Maedhros and his older brother accepting his reassurance so easily in his half-awake state. Breaks my heart to think of how small their troubles are in these scenes compared to what is to come.

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