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Another Man's Cage

Iel_o_Thorongil - 15 Mar 07 - 5:06 PM

Ch. 34: Chapter Thirty-Four--Macalaure

oh no. I hope Nelyo doesn't get foolish.

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Another Man's Cage

IVIaedhros - 15 Mar 07 - 5:35 PM

Ch. 34: Chapter Thirty-Four--Macalaure

"He is human, Macalaurë," Nelyo adds, as though reading my thoughts. I have to wonder sometimes.

Small gaff there.  

As always, your work is superb.  Your updates are always something that I look forward to.  You've been pretty consistent with the Thursday releases and neither quality nor quantity has ever slacked.  Look for an email review sometime in the next week or two.  Hopefully I can give some in-depth critique in repayment for this wonderful tale.  It's the least I can do...it'll be tough though.  I may not always agree with your stylistic approach, but as far as my amateur eyes can tell in a glance, everything is faultless within the limits you set for yourself. 

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ziggy - 10 Mar 13 - 8:46 AM

Ch. 34: Chapter Thirty-Four--Macalaure

Ah- this is a gorgeous chapter, Dawn. Maitimo is beautiful, observed by his brother in this slightly surprised, objective way that seems to almost doesn't know /recognise him. And I love that moment when Macalaure hears himself described as a son of whom Feanor is proud and talks of. That's a lovely moment.

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