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Another Man's Cage

oshun - 08 Dec 06 - 10:28 PM

Ch. 20: Chapter Twenty--Nerdanel

It's fascinating to me that it is in the chapters from Nerdanel's POV that you communicate most specifically the conscious process of creation from the point of view of the artist. The overwhelming, almost frightening, intensity of the passion of Feanor for his wife is similiar to that which you have shown in his love for his sons. You lead the reader to ask the same question: at what cost? The fact that we already know answer increases rather diminishes the suspense. Compelling reading as always.

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