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Another Man's Cage

oshun - 29 Oct 06 - 3:32 PM

Ch. 13: Chapter Thirteen--Findekano

I am always complaining about not liking cute stories with children in them. No danger of that here. There is no lack of lovely imagery in this chapter but my favorite line has to be:

"Tyelkormo walks by and glares at me, then plops down hard in Macalaurë's lap. 'Ai! Ilúvatar in Ea! First cold water on my face, then Tyelkormo sits on my balls—'"

Anyone who doesn't appreciate this has spent very little time around children and teenage boys.


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