Oh, I love it!
Totally love it.
For a long time I did not comment any stories, no matter how much I liked them, because I'm nervous about my english skills .
But I understand that leaving some feedback is the only thing I can do to show an author that I deeply appreciate his/her work, and so I tell you that I love it.
No suggestions, no anything, pure love.
This voice of Nerdanel is so real, and I can recognize this Feanor - unlike some versions of him, where he is written as the husband and father of the year, and Fingolfin is sometimes more like wooden doll than a person. But this Feanor is the same Feanor I know from the books. I like him and I can still see how damaged and infuriating he is. And this Fingolfin is real person I would like to meet :)
Finwe's wink was sweet detail.
I will wait for next parts in great patience, as even when you take long pauses, your stories tend to continue .