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The Sword of Elendil

RS - 16 Dec 08 - 9:05 PM

Ch. 24: The Servant of Mordor

 You got me sweating there for a minute...I knew Aragorn was not going to die...but...it got scary there!  Very suspenseful!  I almost jumped for joy when Daeron and Halbarad prevailed (if it were a scene in a movie I would have!)

 I knew my hope in Daeron was not in vain!  "I am no traitor"  "I am a true Dúnadan."  I love those lines and it truly fit Daeron's character.  

Can we try for an update soon?  It doesn't hurt to ask. 

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Gandalfs apprentice - 17 Dec 08 - 12:15 PM

Ch. 24: The Servant of Mordor

RS, Raihon and all those who have been following "The Sword of Elendil": thanks for reading! I plan to post at least one more chapter by the end of December. Our heroes are still in a lot of trouble!

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Aerenos - 02 Jan 09 - 7:06 PM

Ch. 24: The Servant of Mordor

Another great chapter, GA!  I like the pace you keep from chapter to chapter, without giving up anything on detail.  I am particularly interested in your reference to the Sorceror of Rhudaur, as I am always looking for story ideas about the Dunadain during the time the Northern Realm was split amongst Arthedain, Cardolan and Rhudaur.  Thanks for another great read!

Aerenos.

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obsidianj - 17 Jan 10 - 6:43 PM

Ch. 24: The Servant of Mordor

That was close. I had my suspicions about Beleg, but I didn't anticipate this twist. At Dearon is no traitor.

But you killed off Hawk. He was one of my favorite characters :(.

I hope that at least Rodney will survive this story ;-).

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Larner - 18 Oct 10 - 7:02 AM

Ch. 24: The Servant of Mordor

At this point Elvish medicine is what is needed.  Now--to get the child to Rivendell as soon as possible.

I'd wondered if the beardlessness had something to do with the spell on him.

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