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RS - 16 Dec 08 - 9:05 PM
You got me sweating there for a minute...I knew Aragorn was not going to die...but...it got scary there! Very suspenseful! I almost jumped for joy when Daeron and Halbarad prevailed (if it were a scene in a movie I would have!)
I knew my hope in Daeron was not in vain! "I am no traitor" "I am a true Dúnadan." I love those lines and it truly fit Daeron's character.
Can we try for an update soon? It doesn't hurt to ask.
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Gandalfs apprentice - 17 Dec 08 - 12:15 PM
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Aerenos - 02 Jan 09 - 7:06 PM
Another great chapter, GA! I like the pace you keep from chapter to chapter, without giving up anything on detail. I am particularly interested in your reference to the Sorceror of Rhudaur, as I am always looking for story ideas about the Dunadain during the time the Northern Realm was split amongst Arthedain, Cardolan and Rhudaur. Thanks for another great read!
Aerenos.
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obsidianj - 17 Jan 10 - 6:43 PM
That was close. I had my suspicions about Beleg, but I didn't anticipate this twist. At Dearon is no traitor.
But you killed off Hawk. He was one of my favorite characters :(.
I hope that at least Rodney will survive this story ;-).
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Larner - 18 Oct 10 - 7:02 AM
At this point Elvish medicine is what is needed. Now--to get the child to Rivendell as soon as possible.
I'd wondered if the beardlessness had something to do with the spell on him.
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