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The Sword of Elendil

DrummerWench - 05 Aug 08 - 9:29 PM

Ch. 22: Betrayal

Another excellent chapter, G.A.!  You build the tension well; I appreciate the way the edgier scenes are interspersed with relief.  Showing Gilraen's foresight & building up to the climax of this chapter is well-done!  I love all your characters--they're consistant, believable, and different from each other--not an easy thing to accomplish.  Great job!

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Elrûn - 06 Aug 08 - 2:19 AM

Ch. 22: Betrayal

Gandalfs apprentice,

I completely agree with DrummerWench: Your story is very inspiring, especially its darker aspects! I have been following it for quite a while, enjoying the background it provides for both Aragorn's youth and the Dúnedain in general.

Thank you for all of that:

Elrûn

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RS - 06 Aug 08 - 3:38 PM

Ch. 22: Betrayal

I am hoping he is leaping to save them!  Call me a Polly Anna but I still have hope for Daeron! 

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Gandalfs apprentice - 07 Aug 08 - 9:23 PM

Ch. 22: Betrayal

DrummerWench, Elrun, RS: Thanks for your thoughts on "Betrayal." I'm not going to give the story away, of course, but I can promise not to make you wait so very long for an update....the story will get even more intense before it winds down.

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Larner - 18 Oct 10 - 5:27 AM

Ch. 22: Betrayal

I, too, hope he's come to save them, but I supppose we must see. 

Loved seeing Gilraen mothering Rodnor--the boy needs it!

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