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The Sword of Elendil

RS - 05 Jul 08 - 10:43 PM

Ch. 21: The Grave

Realization certainly dawned on Aragorn regarding Arwen in this chapter... it surely was an eye opener; or did it also pose more questions for him?  And what was this disagreement between the twins? 

"...and he listened white-faced and shaken, for all the preparation he had made in his mind. Halbarad cried out and hid his face in his hands."  --- That one sentence was enough for one's imagination to conceive the horrors of what the Orcs did to Arathorn...really blood chilling.

The reference of the earth remembering Arathorn's death and Aragorn letting his blood drop on the glyphs of his father's grave was very stirring and beautiful!  OMG!

And... that young Estel sure was a handful!  Aragorn and whiskers...and maidens?  Rowrr!

A wonderful chapter!

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The Sword of Elendil

Gandalfs apprentice - 07 Jul 08 - 2:43 PM

Ch. 21: The Grave

RS: Thanks for your comments on "The Sword of Elendil." Yes, Aragorn continues to find out that things are even more complicated than he knew. I hope to post the next chapter, "Betrayal," within the week.

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The Sword of Elendil

Larner - 18 Oct 10 - 1:23 AM

Ch. 21: The Grave

At least he was able to visit the grave and to see the assault.  And he has a good deal to think on--a necessary thing, I think.

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