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Star Gazing

Jay of Lasgalen - 23 Jan 07 - 12:36 PM

General Comment

Thanks, Adaneth!  I didn't want Elrohir to seem uncaring when he forgot Estel's human limitations, and making him so much part of the family made sense to me.

I'm glad you liked the ending.  One day, Estel will learn the full story ...

Jay

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Star Gazing

Adaneth - 23 Jan 07 - 5:11 AM

Ch. 1: Star Gazing

Nice one, Jay!

I like the way you handle the Elf-Man differences, and the restraint at the end.  No, this isn't the time for the whole story, but what a lovely start.

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