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Arwen in the Afternoon

oshun - 13 Feb 06 - 10:35 AM

Ch. 1: Arwen in the Afternoon

Good work. With your latest update on this story, I think you have hit the right balance--a friendship story, with an "in-character" Aragorn and some additional twists that take him off in an unexpected direction. The behavior of the nice but naughty Elf ladies is not Tolkien canon, but is convincing and delightful (and slyly humorous with their comments on the foibles of mortal men) within your AU.

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