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As the Tide by the Moon
JunoMagic - 25 Nov 05 - 3:52 AM
Is it on purpose that you repeat the paragraph about the bracelet (how it is meant to mark her)?
Apart from that this is really an excellent chapter, watching the strategies of Saruman and Gríma unfold.
*shivers some more*
(I guess that it won't help if I beg you to go AU with this once more?)
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As the Tide by the Moon
EdorasLass - 25 Nov 05 - 2:22 PM
Is it on purpose that you repeat the paragraph about the bracelet (how it is meant to mark her)?
Yep! I do that sometimes when I tell a scene from one (or more) POVs, so that there's some feeling on continunity -- I know it can feel disjointed at times, with all these frickin' POVs.
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