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As the Tide by the Moon

JunoMagic - 25 Nov 05 - 2:38 AM

Ch. 11: The Housemaid -IV

I love how you portray the slow change in Lathwyn's feelings, how she falls in love with Théodred and how she slowly realizes that she does love him. You have a wonderful eye for those small nuances of emotions and behaviour.

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As the Tide by the Moon

EdorasLass - 25 Nov 05 - 2:27 PM

Ch. 11: The Housemaid -IV

Thank you! I like slow, gradual changes in characters - it always seems more realistic to me than a whole bunch of epiphanies.

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