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Thawing Lily

Meril - 22 Mar 07 - 7:41 AM

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Soubrettina, every time I re-read this story I either cry or don't breathe until the end. Often both.

The stream-of-consciousness is simply divine, and Eowyn's depressed state of mind "at the end of all things" is nothing short of perfection. I'm completely within her mind every step of the way, seeing the shadows of Mordor and of her own thoughts, and her despair in all its shades.

I spot a few typos here and there, but my eyes simply slide past them in this story because I too "involved," just as Faramir and Eowyn are too involved to realize anything else but themselves.

This remains one of my very favorite Faramir/Eowyn stories, ever. Lovely, lovely job.


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Thawing Lily

Soubrettina - 22 Mar 07 - 8:45 AM

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Wow! I'm off for a few days and when I come back at the top of the page is a total suprise!  (glows- you're too, too kind)

 Hugs Allie! 

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