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Lords of Gondor

Iva1201 - 15 Feb 12 - 8:23 AM

Ch. 47: Battles Won and Lost

Sorry for the late chapter review, I am unfortunately always a bit disorganized with logins and passwords and I cannot remember the HASA one by heart - so it takes me always some time to post a comment and this time it was extremely long, sorry!

I liked how you mixed different lines of the story in this chapter, so that we are updated on what is happening where in the same time. (-: It was great to see the men of Gondor again, too (I like how you portrait each of them and their loyalty to the sons of the Steward (-:).

I keep my fingers crossed for us, so that you have time and INSPIRATION (-: for the next update.

Iva

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