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Lothíriel - The Tenth Walker! Novel

Hannele - 09 Mar 07 - 2:43 PM

General Comment

I just wanted to say that I really like your story. I really felt the culture of the elves and men. Most authors who write tenth walker stories tend to rush their writing, you, however did not. You took your time writing descriptions which were acurate and detailed.

I cried when Lothíriel cried and laughed when she laughed. That is not easly accomplished. I will not forget this story soon - for it made a lasting impression on me - a good one.

Hanelle

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JunoMagic - 10 Mar 07 - 1:24 AM

General Comment

Hello Hannele,

Thank you for reading my story and for taking the time to leave a comment.

I'm really glad you like the story. I've had a lot of fun writing it and developing the characters and the setting. It's great to know that the effort pays off.

Thank you again, and happy reading!

Cheers,
JunoMagic

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outoftheshadow - 09 Apr 10 - 8:50 PM

General Comment

I love this story and I will comment when I'm done, but I just noticed a mistake, I think.  In chapter 48, Miriel says that Eomer was born in 3001 but in the very next chapter, you comment that it is currently the year 3019.  I'm not sure if you meant to make him only 18 or if one of the dates are wrong.  I just wanted to give you a heads up.  Look for my review when I'm done reading the whole story.  I have alot of praise to slather you with. :P

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RS - 03 Sep 08 - 9:54 PM

Ch. 9: An Elvish Jewel

Hi JunoMagic!

I just started reading this epic yesterday and thought I'd take a breather (a short breather mind you) to comment on the story thus far!

Truly a wonderful story. I am enjoying every minute of it.  The characters in your story are how I imagined them to be, especially Aragorn...your description of him, his piercing gaze, the way his face looks younger when he smiles and less of the grim ranger that he is.   I especially love the moment when Aragorn first meets Lothiriel.  

And by the way.... Lothiriel is a hoot!  You've made her so believable...and I got a kick out of her swearing in German!

Your writing is incredible. 

The only thing that bothers me is that your Aragorn does not resemble Viggo Mortensen at all!   Oh well....ya can't have everything!

Well, back to reading!

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sue92178 - 26 May 07 - 8:18 AM

Ch. 16: Doom

This story is fantastic-- I've read a number of 10th walker fanfictions, and this is the first one that has prompted me to comment.  I enjoy the character of Lothiriel, and she is certainly no stereotype.  I look forward to reading the rest of what you have written.

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