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Fever Dreams
JunoMagic - 20 Nov 05 - 12:02 PM
Hi Gwynnyd,
I feel so bad about not commenting more.
I really love this story. The atmosphere you convey is *great*, right on spot.
My only nitpick is right at the beginning:
The flowers of the white tree send a perfume through the lofty white towers of the citadel that cannot quite be grasped as other than joy.
I don't think you need "white" the second time. To avoid repetition I'd simply leave that off.
What I loved most is that Faramir does not immediately remember Aragorn and "fanboy" him.
Cheers,
Juno
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Fever Dreams
Ti'ana Luthien - 16 Feb 06 - 12:09 PM
Oh...Gwynnyd, this is wonderful. The imagery, the atmosphere, the characterization...thank you for bringing it all to life for me.
Cheers,
Ti :)
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