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Only a Game

telpethoniel - 25 Feb 06 - 8:46 PM

Ch. 20: Beyond the Circles of this World

This story is awesome, You personified Elrohir in a way that could have only been matched by Tolkien himself.

I love fanfics and this is in my top 5 of all time!

Tel 

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JunoMagic - 01 Mar 06 - 2:49 AM

Ch. 20: Beyond the Circles of this World

Hi Tel,

Thank you for reading "Only a Game" and for taking the time to leave a comment.

I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed the story so much.

It was interesting to show in "Only a Game" how Elrohir would react if he was for the first time in his long life separated from his brother, and how he would be able to shape a life of his own for himself.

I'm glad that you feel I succeeded with his characterization. 

I don't know if you are aware that "Only a Game" is actually a prequel of one of my other stories, "The Tides of Time and the Bones of the Earth", which is also posted here at HASA, and that I am working on a sequel for both stories. The sequel is called "Return of the Shadow". At the moment it is not yet available at HASA, but you can have a look at it at Tolkien Fan Fiction, here: "Return of the Shadow" 

If you have the time to look at one or the other of those stories, I'd be very interested to hear what you think about it! 

Thank you again. Happy reading!

Yours
JunoMagic

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telpethoniel - 19 Apr 06 - 4:07 AM

Ch. 20: Beyond the Circles of this World

lol, saved and read it ages ago, I sooooooooo wanna be Jarro! I was at the point of tears when I finished Only a Game, it was awesome! And Return of the Shadow takes their relationship to a whole new level.

It's nice to find out Elrohirs reactions when Jarro gives birth :P

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JunoMagic - 19 Apr 06 - 9:30 AM

Ch. 20: Beyond the Circles of this World

Hi Tel,

Thank you for coming back. :-)

"It's nice to find out Elrohirs reactions when Jarro gives birth :P"

Yeah, I'm having a lot of fun tying my stories together in "Shadow" and showing a bit more about what how the life of Jarro and Elrohir continued.

I hope to get another chapter written this week, so maybe we'll see each other over at "Return of the Shadow" soon!

Yours
JunoMagic

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