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Fallen

DKP - 04 Mar 08 - 4:46 PM

Ch. 17: Gone (Interlude)

I'd first read this a while back, and it still awes me: what an astonishing interlude, carrying the inexorable grinding of time among these characters we love and hate, their paths crossing in future and past. Amazingly, I think my favorite snippet is the injured soldier, because it's (I think) the first look we've ever had inside his head, and he's *gasp* human - or was, once.

Great writing, as always. I really enjoy these interludes and the way they can illuminate your people in such wonderful ways, outside the scope of Fallen's tale itself.

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