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DKP - 22 Oct 07 - 11:35 PM

Ch. 16: First Circle

Hello, Aliana,

You've outdone yourself. What an astonishing, surreal chapter... Nothing turned out as I suspected it would, and yet now I wonder how I could have ever thought it would be different.

Perhaps I'll have more coherent thoughts later, as I'm still reeling. I hope you have more time to write now, as I very much want to see how she (hopefully!) recovers.

Thanks for a powerful read,


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