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Fallen

JunoMagic - 30 Apr 06 - 8:49 AM

Ch. 12: Besieged

Ahhh, it's heart-wrenching to see how all that misery and fear is leading up to the Dawnless Day... how collective and individual fates collide and interweave on the way to the abyss.

It will be interesting to see how, and if, the threads of destiny you have woven in your story get disentangled again after the war. 

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DKP - 19 Jun 06 - 11:42 PM

Ch. 12: Besieged

I was rereading this chapter and I'm still heart-broken for your healer. All of the short scenes were well done leading up to the departure to Mordor, but that last one with Beren just hurts. I hope she can take Firiel's advice soon and be kinder to herself.

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oshun - 23 Feb 12 - 6:59 PM

Ch. 12: Besieged

I am really surprised that I had not already read this story. I keep thinking I surely started it years ago! I am reading it now and really enjoying it. My first interest in fanfiction was Minas Tirith during this period. You do it beautifully. About half-way through now. I will give a better comment when I finish.

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