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Fallen

JunoMagic - 25 Nov 05 - 2:34 AM

Ch. 10: Histories

I finally caught up with the story. I can see why it was so difficult to write this chapter, but I have to say, it's really excellent.

The way you interweave the past with the present, the way Valacar and your protagonist interact - halting, both wounded though in very different ways...

What I also admire is how dreary and realistically you portray the culture of Minas Tirith, the prejudices and narrow mindedness of the society, how little individual choices of life and learning there are.

I hope you find the time to continue the story soon.

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